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#Poem 28 : Struggling Heart 

Posted by @BeingAmulya on


No ! please don’t
Don’t cry so hard
Over the issues
Over falling apart

I know you’re hurt
With a new scar
And feeling like pale
And faded star

Don’t break down you little
Struggling heart
Tears and dark
Are the life’s part

Feeling ignored
Lonely and worthless
Is ohkay my dear
Don’t go so hopeless

Like the good days 
The bad one will fly
Even the brightest star
Gets dull in shaded sky!!

Lonely Thoughts !!

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    1. @BeingAmulya says:
      February 3, 2019 at 8:37 am

      This is the sweetest! Thanks a alot Sir! 🌈🌸

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  2. Carl D'Agostino says:
    December 29, 2018 at 10:23 pm

    Best wishes for 2019

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    1. @BeingAmulya says:
      December 29, 2018 at 10:24 pm

      Thank you! 🌈

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  3. Success Inspirers' World says:
    December 27, 2018 at 12:54 pm

    Elegant. Bravo!

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    1. @BeingAmulya says:
      December 27, 2018 at 10:02 pm

      Thank you ☘️

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  4. Shaggy says:
    January 9, 2017 at 1:07 pm

    Woah quite poignant

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    1. Being_Amulya says:
      January 9, 2017 at 5:23 pm

      Thanks

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  5. thiaBasilia says:
    January 9, 2017 at 9:55 am

    Touching! Sharing my heart in return. Amazing!
    Wow! Amazing! The way the Father/Creator is bringing us out of our own selves! Thirty years since He instructed me to journal my life. Thirty years since He empowered me to separate the precious from the vile within my being. The preciousness of His nature. The vileness of my nature. Both inside of me. He set me free. His nature in me now prevails over that nature of mine.
    Behold! The Power Of Love From On High! It Never Fails. It Always Avails! Amazing it is! The way Father is joining us all by such power. Much love to all, thiaBasilia.

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    1. Being_Amulya says:
      January 9, 2017 at 9:59 am

      Thanks for sharing your words !! 😊😊

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  6. YomiShow says:
    January 2, 2017 at 7:24 pm

    We could work together..on a write up
    Forward me your email….
    Mine is ..abayomisowemimo@gmail.com

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    1. Being_Amulya says:
      January 3, 2017 at 7:56 am

      Sure
      Thanks !

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      1. YomiShow says:
        January 3, 2017 at 11:42 pm

        Can we talk on our mail box?

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      2. YomiShow says:
        January 3, 2017 at 11:43 pm

        Poet Amulya i guess?

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  7. wormalblog says:
    December 30, 2016 at 2:12 am

    Aw man, all the emotions are coming haha. Great piece!

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    1. Being_Amulya says:
      December 30, 2016 at 9:28 am

      Thank you 😉

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  8. J L Hunt says:
    December 30, 2016 at 1:06 am

    A very nice poetic piece 🙂

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    1. Being_Amulya says:
      December 30, 2016 at 9:28 am

      Thanks 😊

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  9. joseyphina says:
    December 27, 2016 at 9:27 pm

    Lovely piece.

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    1. Being_Amulya says:
      December 28, 2016 at 8:42 am

      Thank you 😊

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  10. trulyunplugged says:
    December 24, 2016 at 3:45 am

    Beautiful encouragement and empathy in one….such a lovely poem….thanks for sharing your gift 🙂

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    1. Being_Amulya says:
      December 24, 2016 at 1:35 pm

      Thanks alot.
      M glad u liked it 😊

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  11. Success Inspirers' World says:
    December 22, 2016 at 12:25 pm

    So encouraging and nice. Bravo!

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    1. Being_Amulya says:
      December 22, 2016 at 1:27 pm

      Thank you sir 😊❤

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  12. Advo. R.R.'SAGAR' says:
    December 20, 2016 at 12:13 am

    Kya Baat Hai Amulya Ji,
    Bahut Khub.

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    1. Being_Amulya says:
      December 20, 2016 at 12:17 am

      Thanks 😊

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      1. Advo. R.R.'SAGAR' says:
        December 20, 2016 at 12:17 am

        Aapka Swagat Hai Amulya ji.

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  13. atrangizindagieksafar says:
    December 19, 2016 at 12:43 am

    Nothing is permanent…. Ye waqt bhi guzar jaega…. you can read this line both ways…. and both ways it has a different meaning to it…

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    1. Being_Amulya says:
      December 19, 2016 at 6:56 pm

      True words Ma’m!!❤

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  14. Abhishek Chauhan says:
    December 18, 2016 at 1:45 pm

    Best as always 🙂

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    1. Being_Amulya says:
      December 18, 2016 at 1:47 pm

      Thanks alot 😊❤

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  15. Vivek says:
    December 18, 2016 at 10:47 am

    What happene? Abhi tak toh sab kuchh thik thaa na??

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    1. Being_Amulya says:
      December 18, 2016 at 10:56 am

      Abhi bhi sb thik hai. Bs aise e likh di ye.
      Thnx fr the concern 😊

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  16. Lauren says:
    December 18, 2016 at 3:07 am

    Beautiful last line, just lovely!

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    1. Being_Amulya says:
      December 18, 2016 at 10:33 am

      Thanx a lot ❤

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  17. D. Wallace Peach says:
    December 17, 2016 at 1:01 am

    Beautiful poem, both sad and hopeful. ❤

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    1. Being_Amulya says:
      December 17, 2016 at 9:37 am

      Thanx alot 😊

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  18. Rhyme In Time says:
    December 15, 2016 at 5:29 am

    Really cool image in the concluding lines, “Even the brightest star / Gets dull in shaded sky”. 🙂

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    1. Being_Amulya says:
      December 15, 2016 at 7:43 pm

      Thanks a ton 😊

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  19. Rozealle says:
    December 14, 2016 at 5:03 pm

    YOU WRITE SO BEAUTIFUL !!! 🙂

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    1. Being_Amulya says:
      December 15, 2016 at 7:43 pm

      Thank you deah 😘

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  20. novelistbaba says:
    December 12, 2016 at 1:55 pm

    true…….with time…….bad days will give way to the good ones……….nothing remains forever…….lovely poem!! 🙂 🙂

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    1. Being_Amulya says:
      December 12, 2016 at 4:20 pm

      Thanks alot 😊

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      1. novelistbaba says:
        December 12, 2016 at 4:22 pm

        my pleasure!!! 🙂 🙂

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