#Poem 119: When a shooting star falls

_TellMeYourDeepestWish

When a shooting star falls
What do you wish for?
Love, faith, commitment
Or joys of materialistic things?
Do you close your eyes
And see the face of your lover
And smile for you have
Nothing more to wish for?
Or you just put your hand
On your chest
To feel the heartbeat
Of a lover who is now
At the eternal rest
Or do you wish to finally end
The never ending inside war
When a shooting star falls
What do you wish for?

💜

7 Comments Add yours

  1. Vivek says:

    I wish for peace✌🏻

    Liked by 1 person

    1. @BeingAmulya says:

      🌸🌸 much needed! I hope you’re doing good!

      Liked by 1 person

      1. Vivek says:

        I am doing great, deah!

        Liked by 1 person

  2. This is a wonderful, powerful poem Amulya. The pendulum-like repetition of the question you ask of the reader is justified by the mystery and beauty of the poem and the way you present it.

    Liked by 2 people

    1. @BeingAmulya says:

      Thank you so much Xavier. It’s been a while. I hope you’re safe and in pink of your health. Thank you for commenting 🌸

      Like

  3. Sorry, when a shooting star falls.

    Liked by 1 person

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