#Poem 103: Roses or thorns?

Some see the beautiful stars
Some just see the dark night
While some see themselves
And find the brightest light
No matter how vivid
This world gets to be
You will see it black and white
If you chose that to see
You can have all the power
And yet never feel strong
If you keep believing
To weakness you belong
The world that has roses
Will have thorns as well
What do you want to be?
On what do you dwell? 🌹

23 Comments Add yours

  1. Amittras Pal says:

    Beautiful, I like the way it ends on a question, as if begging for an answer, that’s difficult to come.

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    1. @BeingAmulya says:

      Thank you so much ☘️

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  2. Wouldn’t mind fewer thorns though.

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    1. @BeingAmulya says:

      Thank you K for recommending ❀️😘

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    1. @BeingAmulya says:

      Thanks a ton sweetheart β€οΈπŸ’‹

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      1. You betcha my beautiful sis! πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸŒŸπŸŒŸ love the writing!!

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      2. @BeingAmulya says:

        β€οΈπŸ’žπŸ’‹

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  3. Mayur says:

    Life is full of romance, passion, and surprises, but it would mean absolutely nothing if I didn’t have you by my side.

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  4. Glad to see you writing again. Your poem challenges us to be sensitive and strong. You are write from your heart here.

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    1. @BeingAmulya says:

      Thank you, Xavier.
      It’s been a while since I wrote something. It was quite tough to get back in rhythm. But happy to be back ! 🌼

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  5. Very nice. I agree. We become that which we dwell on.

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    1. @BeingAmulya says:

      Thank you, Sir 🌼

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    1. @BeingAmulya says:

      Thank you 🌼

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  6. Amazing, Simple yet powerful !!

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    1. @BeingAmulya says:

      Thank you so much 🌼

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  7. Sandeep says:

    This is so much ‘my kind of’ poem! Like the simple imagery.

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    1. @BeingAmulya says:

      I’m glad it is! Thank you 🌼

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