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  1. sherin says:

    Little hard to believe you wrote this from pure imagination πŸ™‚

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    1. @BeingAmulya says:

      Hehe thanks. I did.

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  2. Abhay says:

    Beautifully portrayed that feeling which, at times, is inconceivable!

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    1. @BeingAmulya says:

      Thank you so much 🌸🌸

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  3. The whole poem works beautufully, especially how the “shooting star falls” and how you end with a rhyming couplet, which is a characteristic of sonnets, except they are made up of 14 lines. Yours has 21. Interestingly, that is 3 times 7 (a sonnet is 2 times 7). You might want to research the sonnet some time.

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    1. @BeingAmulya says:

      Thank you, Xavier ! And I didn’t notice that. I have heard and read a bit about sonnets.
      Thank you for noticing this ! 🌸

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  4. Bhavana says:

    Love is magical!!

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    1. @BeingAmulya says:

      It is ! 🌸🌸

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