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  1. Ok. My suggestion slightly modifies lines 10, 11 12:

    I took a road
    For the truth, I aim.
    What if they don’t like it?
    Honesty and comfort are not the same.

    That’s it! For your consideration.

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    1. @BeingAmulya says:

      That’s perfect 😻😻 Thank you Xavier ! I’ll modify it soon !

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  2. If you have written a poem about the season of spring, or would like to write one, here is a link to a poetry contest from one of the sites I follow. I think it is open for a couple of weeks. Best regards. https://writtenintheinkblog.wordpress.com/2018/05/07/poetry-contest/

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    1. @BeingAmulya says:

      Thank you Xavier ! 🤗

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  3. The message of this poem is good. If you want a suggestion about the last line, I can get back to you. I still mentor on line, but you may or may not want mentoring. Let me know if you do.

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    1. @BeingAmulya says:

      Thank you Xavier ! And sure ! I would like to have your suggestion ! You’re still a mentor who helped me grow. 🙂

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