And she left
In the middle of sentence
Everything ended
Everything that was intense
She couldn’t stop
She not even wanted to
She made her way out
And things turned blue
Pain is to be felt
Like she did
Dying inside
Fading in bliss
Like the bright sun
She will set soon
She’ll shine as a star
Near the milky moon
In sands of negligence
Her presence will fade
These thoughts in her mind
Endlessly invade
As the last few steps
Towards oblivion she takes
The nightmare ends
As she wakes !!
I felt sorry for her,but alas a dream….
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Yeah it is !
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Loved it
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TNX deah
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Very nice piece π
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Thanx alot β€
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Towards oblivion.. Lovely
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Thanks a tonn β€
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Nice poem…
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Thanks π
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βΊ
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This is great.
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Thanks alot β€
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Happy birthday! Wishing you a wonderful day! π
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Thaank youuu deah β€
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Happy birthday!
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Thank you β€
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Well written !
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Thank you β€
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You are welcome π
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Best as Always……
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Thank you β€
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Beautiful Poetry.See U After Many Days Ma’am.
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Yes. Was a bit ill
Well new name hmm!!
Thnku sir β€
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Welcome Ma’am.
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It’s nice. Thank God she awoke and is with us; and is our blessing.
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Hehe. Thank you sir β€
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it moved me .. very nice ammu
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Thanks Sup β€ π
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batao what made u write this ?
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Hehe actually i was ill. And saw a nightmare like this one.
So i wrote it.
Everything that i write is based on my experience.
This ain’t that well though. Just wrote it. π
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Nice
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Thank you
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