#18 Poem: Its A New Day !! :)

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The sun is up, 
Its morning again, 
But its a little different, 
I can feel it in my vein. 

The birds are singing, 
In a more pleasant way, 
Their sweet chirping, 
Says me its a good day. 

The wind is slow, 
Soft and cold, 
It whispers that my life, 
Will be as I mould. 

The trees look happy, 
The branches dance, 
They remind me of good, 
Moments at a glance. 

The blue blue sky, 
Is so quite and peaceful, 
As if it tells me to be, 
Honest, loyal and graceful. 

Indeed its a new, 
And a wonderful day, 
Positive vibes are in, 
To take me on the right way!!

Every new morning brings new opportunities.. all you need is to grab them..

© Amulya Bhardwaj

26 Comments Add yours

  1. Lovely…a breath of fresh air…thanks for sharing 🙂

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    1. Being_Amulya says:

      You’ll make me blush by so mch of encouragement. ❤

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      1. You deserve it 🙂

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  2. sutlive2 says:

    Dear Amulya Bhardwaj,
    I may not be able to comment on your posts in the next week or two but will try to view and read your posts when I get a chance.
    Regards,
    Sam Sutlive.

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    1. Amulya says:

      Hey its all right.. even i wont be able to post comment or like a few months.
      Have a great time ahead dear…

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  3. sutlive2 says:

    Dear Amulya Bhardwaj,
    I liked your poem. Positive thinking always seems to bring one a nice day.

    I would like to challenge the Dark Knight to turn his comment:

    “It wud hv been more better to read if it hd been little cool weather here… if it wud hv been a spring dawn time..n as u mentind of cool wind..birds chirping..it wud hv been perfect 😀 its too warm here.. bt feeling thm also boots up.. i found it too gud 😀 great!!!”

    into a poem to celebrate a new day with his suggestions for his area.

    I mean what I am saying in the best possible way but was disappointed that you said this is great but…
    I understand that criticism for criticisms sake can be good and helpful, however in this situation I would only say what you like about the poem since the poem is about a new refreshing day.

    Thank you,
    Sincerely,
    Sam Sutlive.

    Could you in your own words maybe say the weather on this new day may become cool and comfortable as the dawn light fades into the sunshine of noonday, bringing new hopes, joys and interactions. To be with others and to be at peace.

    Again I am not trying to point fingers. Dark Knight, If you think I am misinterpreting your comment then you can disregard what I have written and in that case I will apologize to Amulya Bhardwaj for bringing it up as a concern.
    Sincerely,
    Sam Sutlive.

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  4. Amulya says:

    Yeah.. things are just fine… i mean… things btwn me n him.. ended up…

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  5. Bobby says:

    Seems you had a beautiful and refreshing morning.. i wish you to have them everyday! Nice work..

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    1. Amulya says:

      Thank you bro!!
      But, hard days are goin on..

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      1. Bobby says:

        What you mean by hard days? Is everything fine there?

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  6. Wow… too gud.. loved it 🙂 feeling much better after gng thrh it 🙂 very well dne

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    1. Amulya says:

      Thanks alot ^-^

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      1. It wud hv been more better to read if it hd been little cool weather here… if it wud hv been a spring dawn time..n as u mentind of cool wind..birds chirping..it wud hv been perfect 😀 its too warm here.. bt feeling thm also boots up.. i found it too gud 😀 great!!!

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      2. Amulya says:

        Hahaha…. thanxxxx !! 🙂

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    1. Amulya says:

      Hehe thank you deah ^-^
      Your words make me smile always..

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      1. Hahaha!! And ur poems make me think!!

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      2. Amulya says:

        Hehehehe… Thank you for encouraging me !! 🙂 hope you’ll be doin the same again n again 😉

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  7. Even I am feeling very positive today!
    Beautifully designed,A!
    -S

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    1. Amulya says:

      That’s great 🙂

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      1. I too wrote something,spur of the moment!
        -s

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      2. Amulya says:

        Great… eagerly waiting for it 😀

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      3. I posted it on my blog!
        -S

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      4. Amulya says:

        Oh wait then.. lemmi read it frst..

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      5. Sure! Waiting for your feedback!
        -S

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      6. Amulya says:

        Although i am not that good at commenting lol but yes!! You did a great job!! Loved it…

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