#1 Poem : Thought’s Ship

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Standing on the edge,
Of my thought’s ship,
Trying to hold on,
My life’s loosing grip.

 Sailing through the sea,
Of emotions and deeds,
Some goods some bads,
Some wise and some greeds.

 Taking small sips,
Of the emotions I choose,
Making choice by soul,
And setting my heart loose.

 Here goes humanity,
Inside me sip by sip,
It makes me a good human,
From toe to tip.

 Here I vomit out,
Envy and hatred,
True internal stability,
By this I get.

 Now the turn of faith,
That I took out from depth,
Faith towards almighty,
And his people I get.

 Then goes out temptations,
From the core of me,
This makes me wiser,
Like everyone should really be.

 Likewise I sipped all,
The goods from the sea,
And while sailing through life,
I found the BETTER ME !!

15 Comments Add yours

  1. cdmind says:

    i seriously love the way you write….it’s so good….it’s superb….
    your style of expressing is the best…i love your poems…. 🙂

    Liked by 1 person

    1. @BeingAmulya says:

      It’s really overwhelming to hear so much of appreciation.
      Thank you so much !! ☺

      Liked by 1 person

  2. Creativitopia says:

    wow, this is a truly inspiring poem about feelings and thoughts. May I re-blog it on my blog?

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Being_Amulya says:

      Yeah for sure
      M glad you liked it 😍

      Liked by 1 person

  3. Thinkdigest says:

    Wow this poem is actually beautiful.
    Following for to get more of your awe-inspiring piece.
    Much love,
    George

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Amulya says:

      Thank you so much 🙂

      Liked by 1 person

      1. Thinkdigest says:

        You’re most welcome.

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  4. Ishan Banerjee says:

    Hi! Your poem is very beautiful. But I would draw your attention to the colour of background and your font.
    Try using some contrast nextc time.
    And all the best!

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Amulya says:

      Thank you Sir!!
      And i cannot change the font colour. Its in the premium plan. N i m using the free version of WordPress. Lol
      Still thanks alot.

      Like

      1. Ishan Banerjee says:

        Oh..
        I understand.

        Liked by 1 person

      2. Amulya says:

        Oww sheh!! Lol i just had a look there. Actually i had chanGED the theme recently. I didn’t checked it after that. The new posts are well settled with the colour and background.
        Thank you !! I can now try to fix it.
        Thanks alot.

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      3. Amulya says:

        Done with it.
        Thanks again. 🙂

        Like

  5. Anshuman says:

    truly one of the best from your side!! I’m not flattering this is true.. its always great to read your work.. wonderful!!!

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Amulya says:

      Thank you Sir!! 🙂

      Like

      1. Anshuman says:

        ur most welcome 🙂

        Like

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